Yes, this be a writerly rant :)
The way I see my first drafts is that they're my foundation.  I don't aim for amazingly perfect or even Really Good (although they have their moments - whose first draft doesn't at least have a few?) but I do aim to try and give myself a good structure to build on when I go in for the first rewrite.  Some people edit as they go, and if that works for you then by all means work with it :)  If I go back and edit nothing gets done.  Anyway, I'm tangenting here.  Chapters 1 and 2 for The Dragon King came around okay, but this is looking to be a stubborn ms.  First, I've renamed the one female character once and am looking at doing so again.  The names I chose just don't thrill me, and it's hard to write a character whose name I hate.  Now I'm about midway through Chapter 3 (I think) and I've rewritten this several times already!  It's just not coming out right, and eventually the writing dies off.  Usually starting with a blank page and reworking the part that isn't working so that I can continue writing works, which is something I've had to do a few times with earlier chapters but this is ridiculous.  I don't know if it's because this is a major plot point or my first go-round with fantasy romance but I am Not Pleased.  I think I've got it this time now though.  It's not perfection, but it's enough that I can continue on with the chapter now.  I'm just hoping this isn't a bad omen of sorts, because I don't want to see this book become a trunk novel.  I love it way too much, and I'm going to work my butt off to make it good enough for a publisher (hopefully an agent first though!)
I have some new followers I see, big welcomes to you :)  It's always fun to see a new stalker (and I mean that nicely I promise) and meet people in the writing industry, although I don't feel like I'm truly 'in' it just yet.  Just a note, if you've followed my blog and I haven't followed you back within a day or too just comment and let me know.  I'm a stickler on returning the favor and I like finding new blogs to follow.  Hmm, that sounded kind of creepy.  Ah well.
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2 comments:
ugh, i'm like you. I have a hard time moving forward if i don't like a character's name
I agree, names are a big deal. if it's not right I can't write!
Yay more stalkers!!
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